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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vw_H-hMwO08&feature=youtu.be
[size=14pt]Changes I will make:[/size]
goes without saying, but add final track w/ sound fx
fix the bright lime green throughout
0:26 slight camera jump that I will TRY to fix :-/
0:39 screen shake when excavator breaks open a block
add smoke to the data center excavator (wasteful energy)
0:50 change “different” banner - just to double check, should it now say “improved”?
1:13 “participate equally” show check marks on each computer
1:23 arrow stabs into a peercoin (left hand side)
1:37 small audio glitch
1:46 light bulb yellow is too overpowering
1:48 fade the dev scene in AND have slight movements for some/most of the stick dudes
1:51 radial/zoom motion blur as the camera leaves the window, perhaps slight blur continues to hide slight pixeling in the roadway
1:54 make a lens flare that covers more of the scene, current one is not noticeable
[size=14pt]Jabun:[/size]
I added significant pauses after 1:48, there was no way I could show the devs AND the city without being super-rushed. Hope this is not a problem. At any rate, you now have all the animation to work with, so that’s a plus
[size=14pt]Cybnate:[/size]
I will accept the lower amount that you quoted. I realize this has been a difficult time for all and I would like to turn this situation around as much as possible. I think a 3 week deadline is not fair at all for the PPC community. I can’t speak for Jabun, but I can have the animation ready to go by the end of tomorrow.
[size=14pt]Jabun:[/size]
I don’t want to put any further pressure on you, please let me know your thoughts!