A few comments on the slides. Please note, I do not use reddit, so someone will have to copy-paste this onto reddit for me
First of all, please update or delete the link to the (old) slides in the opening post. We should be commenting only on the most recent version (or put both versions, and indicate which one is superceded and which one is current)
Please number the slides
Third slide – suggest delete “Equal for everyone who mints”, since the meaning of 1% should be self-evident. Also, replace “best of both worlds” with “Benefits of the hybrid model” or some such
Fourth slide – I am inclined to remove “backbone currency” – in a shared meeting of various crypto-coin people, declaring peercoin the backbone currency may come across as rather self-important and pompass, and alienate people in the audience
There needs to be a new slide focusing on the 0.01 transaction fee, and explaining why this is needed, as this is one of our perceived weak points. I am not qualified to say, but my understanding is that it reduces the blockchain size, prevents double spending, and counteracts the inflation caused by the 1% increase in peercoins, thereby tilting peercoin towards saving. Explanations relating to the small blockchain and inflation/deflation balance can then hang off this transaction fee slide (this is a better structure - at the moment, the talk is going backwards, from small blockchain back to transaction fee, which is not a logical progression)
Make sure the word “saving” appears
Slide eight – I suggest amending the title from “How is Peercoin more secure” to “How is Peercoin secure” (i.e. remove the word “more”). Do not try and compete with Bitcoin, as it may alienate people
Ongoing Progress slide - I would remove “active enthusiastic community”, as every coin claims this. How about regular weekly development updates, and interviews with developer Sunny King
Last slide: I would remove the twitter bird and facebook logos, as they detract from the more important website and forum addresses
I notice that some of the “verbal” sentences are adding information that is not in the slides (e.g. technical info on coin days). Be wary of this, as most people will not absorb it