[quote=“Sentinelrv, post:8, topic:1862”]Ok, here’s a couple things.
- I think you should center the logo. It looks better like that in my opinion.
- In “so lets get started” I believe “lets” needs an apostrophe.
- Insert John’s last name, Manglaviti.
- In “section of the offical forums” official needs another i.
- Under the Peershare news, I would put in a short description of what Peershare is for people who have no idea. Maybe this…
“Peershare is a way for businesses to manage publicly held shares in a decentralized fashion. It uses the Peercoin network to automate the distribution of associated dividends in the form of Peercoins.”
I took two sentences from Jordan Lee’s original post and combined them. If this isn’t a correct description then try it out yourself.
- Try using this title on Bitcointalk. It incorporates teasers to get people to click on the thread. I tested it and it just fits.
[PPC] Peercoin Newsletter #7: Client 0.3.1 - Peershare 500k Fund - Bitcoin Miami[/quote]
Thanks sentinel. Updated. Question, while I know Peershare operates using the PPC network, I thought it would allow distribution of dividends in any currency of their choosing?